Analysis of Love,why!



Love,why!
Why do you hurt me
Why are you hurting me
Why do I have always grieve you

My love,
You were kind to me,
You gave me peace,
In your arms,
I felt safe,
I mattered,
So I thought,

You changed,
I lost value,
In your eyes,
I was nolonger special,

My heart is shattered,
Realization,
Shattered my heart,
You changed,
Your nolonger mine,
Im foreign
In your heart
I can feel it
The love is nolonger there
Often, I cry

Why,
Why did you have to leave,
We could have been so good together

Im hurt,
The memories
Im  hurt
The pain is unbearable
Im hurt
But
Im gland you left

Love
My love
Self love
Youll never forsake me
For eternity
You will
Always be kind
To me
Always be there
You will never fade.


Scheme abbc Abxxadx Ecxf dghExghxij jax KxkfKxx aAabbxxbix
Poetic Form Tetractys  (56%)
Metre 1 11111 111101 1111111 11 10111 1111 011 111 110 111 11 1110 011 11110 11110 1010 1011 11 111 110 011 1111 01111 1011 1 111111 111111010 11 0100 11 0110100 11 1 1111 1 11 11 110011 10100 11 111 11 111 11101
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 707
Words 169
Sentences 2
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 4, 7, 4, 10, 3, 7, 10
Lines Amount 45
Letters per line (avg) 12
Words per line (avg) 3
Letters per stanza (avg) 76
Words per stanza (avg) 20

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Conversation with love and how it treats me

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Written on April 21, 2023

Submitted by hitekanimafuyeka on August 21, 2023

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Love,why!

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