Analysis of A Poem For My Bubbles



Love so strong and now torn apart.
Cold shards where my heart did break.
Smokes smell lingers in my heart,
Memories of us a big mistake.
The peachers words they weighed me down.
Like old bread sitting in our kitchen.
I messed up made her frown.
Lost her love with my bad decisions.
Home we had it’s now a mess.
The nights we cuddled are just a dream.
Burning hearts silly fights I confess my
hopes a fading light.
like a dying beam this seems obscene.
I'm sorry for the hurt I've done.
Its changing me all wrong turns.
Took her heart broke it and I was the one.
Can't go back now as the fires still burn.
Cats gone time flies my life's a mess.
Longing for relief from this pain.
Wanting to escape it’s not just, guess I’m
seeking peace from this emotional rain.
She was the light in my darkest days guiding me through every storm.
Now shes gone in different ways she left me here I’m feeling so torn.
No choice left please take me away.
End this pain end this life.
Sunny days turned skies to gray.
Lost the love of my life.
Trees turned to ashes, streams all dry.
A home we shared now it's gone.
I lost my lover don't know why I wrote today.
Saying goodbye to the one I lost.


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Poetic Form
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Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,185
Words 257
Sentences 28
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 31
Lines Amount 31
Letters per line (avg) 29
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 907
Words per stanza (avg) 229

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My hearts last shot at apologizing for past mistakes.

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Written on August 28, 2023

Submitted by Pangurban on August 28, 2023

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