Analysis of The emptyness



The emptyness i feel inside
not sure why you had to die
every since you died i have
had this emptyness inside.
I feel this in my heart and
in my soul. I dont know why but
i have not gotten over it.
The day you died something inside of me did too.
Every since i have not been the same.
i feel so empty alone and just dont know how to get out of this . So i give it all to God to help me thru
I am so lost and alone and nobody knows how i feel inside.


Scheme ABCADEFGHGA
Poetic Form
Metre 011101 1111111 10011111 11101 1110110 01111111 11110101 011110011111 1001111101 1111001011111111111111111111 111100101111101
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 451
Words 105
Sentences 8
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 11
Lines Amount 11
Letters per line (avg) 31
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 342
Words per stanza (avg) 101

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just how i feel

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Written on September 05, 2023

Submitted by birdie14810 on September 05, 2023

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Alberta Houghtaling

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