Analysis of August 30/30 5:00 pm



did leaving me fix you?
is your life more beautiful without me in it to ruin all those colourful parts?
did it work out the way you wanted it to?
is the sky more blue?
the air warmer?
do the songs we liked to listen to sound better?
it was the right choice, right?


Scheme ABAACCD
Poetic Form
Metre 110111 1111100011011101111 11110111011 10111 0110 101111101110 110111
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 271
Words 60
Sentences 8
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 7
Lines Amount 7
Letters per line (avg) 29
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 203
Words per stanza (avg) 54
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Submitted by jaxonhurst on August 30, 2023

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