Analysis of Loki's Revenge



A demon’s playing
but no one’s listening
Black whirlwind coming
tomorrow hissing

The moment christened
in dark despair
Entrapping vision
beyond repair

A mantra chanting
its rhythm waning
Despoiled virtue
with time refraining

Unmasking Hoder
in blind respite
The god of darkness
—and lost delight

(Dreamsleep: August, 2023)


Scheme AAAA XBXB AAXA BXXX X
Poetic Form
Metre 01010 111100 1110 0110 01010 0101 110 0101 01010 11010 110 11010 11 0110 01110 0101 110
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 333
Words 52
Sentences 1
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 1
Lines Amount 17
Letters per line (avg) 16
Words per line (avg) 3
Letters per stanza (avg) 54
Words per stanza (avg) 10
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Submitted by KurtPhilipBehm on August 28, 2023

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Kurt Philip Behm

Longtime writer with twelve books in publication. Three of them Poetry. : The Death Of The Playground : The Sword Of Ichiban : Searching For Crazy Horse : Darkening Sun : An Anthology Of Perception-Vol's 1 & 2 : After Midnight : Sammy And Bumpers : The Fall City Mandate : Revenge Along The War Trail : Death from The Sky more…

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