Analysis of Aquamarine



Everglades
Whisper a solemn plea
Warning me to walk away
As the mangroves consume me
Cast me out into shallow waters
Drifting further from the lauder
Enveloped by my own reflection

Cascade
Slowly below the mineral surface
Like a moth to the flame
All the empty space between us
I can’t hold back the tide
In this virgin state of mind
Afar, the rapids avert my objection

Palisade
My fortress contrived of anguish
Where I forever hide behind
Hidden desires I’ll never languish
Distant memoirs rooted in despair
Shield your heart from the affair
Awaiting an unfeigned resurrection

Everglades
Our tapestry of aquamarine memories
A lovers collection of charades
And the Seminole winds call out to me
Carry me home, wherever it goes
Guide me further down the road
Always longing for attention


Scheme Abxbxxc dexexfc dgfghhc Axabxxc
Poetic Form
Metre 10 100101 1011101 101011 111011010 10101010 010111010 01 1001010010 101101 10101011 111101 0110111 01010011010 01 11001110 11010101 1001011010 10110001 1111001 01011010 10 101001001100 010010101 001011111 101101011 1110101 1101010
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 793
Words 136
Sentences 1
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 7, 7, 7, 7
Lines Amount 28
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 163
Words per stanza (avg) 33

About this poem

Florida is a naturally beautiful oasis, but home to some of the worst human beings in society. It's a wonder how such a heaven-on-Earth could be infested with so many hateful people. As they say, wherever there is light, there will always be darkness. When you are young, love comes easily... naturally. It's in everything and everywhere. I think it's easier to fall in love when you are young and naive, full of wonder about the world around you. At some point, you harden your heart in the harsh shade of reality. Then, that innocence is stripped away forever... and the simplicity of giving or receiving love goes with it. 

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Written on December 07, 2021

Submitted by ammiemarie on August 16, 2023

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Ammie-Marie Littke

Ammie-Marie Littke is an American writer, songwriter, multimedia designer, and data analyst. Born and raised in southwest Michigan, she learned to love music and literature from the age of 4, adapting the ability to recognize a popular song within the first few seconds of airplay on the radio. She spent much of her teenage youth exploring her creative skills, writing nearly 200 poems and song lyrics between the ages of 11 and 17. She earned a Bachelor's Degree in Web Design & Interactive Media from the Art Institute of Pittsburgh and an Associate's Degree in Graphic Design Management from Bradford School in Pittsburgh, Pennsylvania. She graduated from East High School in Youngstown, Ohio. more…

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