Analysis of Addiction's Unforgiving Hand



In the shadowed corners of a childhood past,
A mother's struggle with demons that would last,
The echoes of addiction's heavy toll,
Affecting innocent hearts, taking its toll.

The children who stood on uncertain ground,
Witnessing a battle that would resound,
They saw a hero, yet also a foe,
As addiction's tendrils continued to grow.

Innocence shattered, trust eroded away,
As the mother they cherished began to sway,
Through the highs and lows, the pain and strife,
They learned to navigate this uncertain life.

The wounds run deep, an everlasting scar,
Affecting how they see themselves from afar,
The fear, the anger, the longing to heal,
The emotions that time alone cannot seal.

Yet within this darkness, a strength unfolds,
For those children carry stories untold,
They learn resilience, compassion, and might,
As they forge their own paths into the light.

They strive to break chains that bind them tight,
Redefining their futures, rewriting their plight,
Though scars remain, they'll rise above,
Drawing on the strength of a mother's love.

For even amidst addiction's bitter hold,
A mother's love can still be extolled,
Her struggles have shaped, but they don't define,
The children she loves, her legacy's sign.

In their journeys forward, they'll find their way,
With the strength to heal, the courage to sway,
The cycle of pain, to break it apart,
For they carry a fire within their heart.

So, let's remember the children who stand,
Touched by addiction's unforgiving hand,
May they find the healing, the love, the grace,
And create a future, a better place.


Scheme AABB CCDD EEFF GGHH XIJJ JJKK IILL EEMM NNOO
Poetic Form Quatrain  (89%)
Metre 0010101011 01010110111 01011101 01010011011 0101110101 100010111 1101011001 11101011 10010101001 10101100111 101010101 1111010101 011110101 01011101101 0101001011 00101101101 1011100101 1110101001 11010001001 1111110101 111111111 001011001011 11011101 1010110101 110011101 010111101 0101111101 01011011 0110101111 1011101011 0101111101 11100100111 1101001011 11100101 1110100101 0010100101
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 1,578
Words 302
Sentences 9
Stanzas 9
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 36
Letters per line (avg) 35
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 138
Words per stanza (avg) 29

About this poem

This poem,. first published in 2023 takes the reader on how drug addiction can impact children and the impact it can have on human life.

Font size:
 

Written on August 16, 2023

Submitted by Cjarrellnay on August 16, 2023

1:34 min read
3

Discuss this CRYSTAL, JARRELL poem analysis with the community:

0 Comments

    Citation

    Use the citation below to add this poem analysis to your bibliography:

    Style:MLAChicagoAPA

    "Addiction's Unforgiving Hand" Poetry.com. STANDS4 LLC, 2024. Web. 9 May 2024. <https://www.poetry.com/poem-analysis/166703/addiction%27s-unforgiving-hand>.

    Become a member!

    Join our community of poets and poetry lovers to share your work and offer feedback and encouragement to writers all over the world!

    May 2024

    Poetry Contest

    Join our monthly contest for an opportunity to win cash prizes and attain global acclaim for your talent.
    22
    days
    19
    hours
    11
    minutes

    Special Program

    Earn Rewards!

    Unlock exciting rewards such as a free mug and free contest pass by commenting on fellow members' poems today!

    Browse Poetry.com

    Quiz

    Are you a poetry master?

    »
    Who was “admirably schooled in every grace”?
    A Odysseus
    B Richard Cory
    C Miniver Cheevy
    D J. Alfred Prufrock