Analysis of THE cage

mad hippie poet 1974 (new jersey)



Can we play pretend just a bit longer? Maybe you can hold me for a little bit longer until I'm feeling a bit stronger, at least, or until I no longer feel like this fucking beast that roams through the valleys of my mind occupying all of my time, for I am no longer so much of this tragedy that haunts me, please dear universe smile down on me.

I only want to play pretend a bit longer until I can step into the light and become my own best friend again. This is what I am fighting for. I feel the fire burn from within. The flame that fills the skies is the flame that colors my eyes. I know that I'm stronger than whatever it is that is trying to kill me give me the key to the thoughts of my cage that will set my mind free.


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Poetic Form
Metre 111011011010111110101100111001101110111101111011110101111001111111110111110011111101111 11011101011001111010100111110111111101110101101011101101110111111101101111101111101101111111111
Characters 728
Words 152
Sentences 7
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 1, 1
Lines Amount 2
Letters per line (avg) 283
Words per line (avg) 75
Letters per stanza (avg) 283
Words per stanza (avg) 75
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Written on August 15, 2023

Submitted by Oakley on August 15, 2023

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mad hippie poet

I have been writing for 40 years my poetry is about life,death love,and redemption. after having two near death expiercences and a TBI my poetry has become more spirtual more…

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