Analysis of LOVE LETTER FROM THE UNIVERESE

mad hippie poet 1974 (new jersey)



My eyes were blind, but I returned like a hungry wolf leading the pack. And with the pride of a  lion, I am like a phoenix continuously rising from the ashes. I need to silence my mind and wait my time. Please do not allow them to control me by my anger. I am reading the warning signs, and they read danger ahead. My guides tell me to stay off that track and walk cautiously.

I keep my heart open, but they keep poking the bear. I am not going back to who I once was. I am perfectly imperfect, but I keep improving and hold the universe's love letter in my pocket.

Letter I read every day when I'm feeling down. I look at the stars and the moon and hear their every sound. They are speaking to me, saying times will get worse before they get better, but you, you dear son of ours, come from a family of warriors who know how and when to fight and what is at stake to be won.

Deep within the words of this letter that is personalized from the universe to me, it says you have tasted the saltiness and the sweetness of our love as we watched you be carved in stone, even with your aging hands and bone. This is our song to you. We are with you, and you're never alone, for we will always follow you no matter how deep or low you go. We will be here to watch you continue to grow.

This handwritten letter reads, "When we can not record your love letters, remember to look in the skies night or day, for everything holds the messages we care to say. All you need to do is see with your mind and not. Your eyes, for even these words, are our disguise.


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Characters 1,551
Words 317
Sentences 19
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 5
Letters per line (avg) 239
Words per line (avg) 62
Letters per stanza (avg) 239
Words per stanza (avg) 62
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Written on August 10, 2023

Submitted by Oakley on August 10, 2023

Modified by Oakley on August 11, 2023

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mad hippie poet

I have been writing for 40 years my poetry is about life,death love,and redemption. after having two near death expiercences and a TBI my poetry has become more spirtual more…

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