Analysis of PTSD's grip



In the depths of darkness, nightmares arise,
Intrusive thoughts, like shadows, mesmerize.
PTSD's grip, relentless and unkind,
A haunting presence that consumes the mind.

Avoidance becomes a shield, a fragile defense,
To shield the heart from pain, to build a pretense.
But in the silence, memories fade away,
Lost fragments of a life, where colors once did play.

Negative thoughts, like poison, seep within,
Whispering doubts, fueling a constant din.
Self-isolation, a lonely refuge sought,
To hide from the world, where solace is sought.

Anger and irritability, a tempest's wrath,
A storm within, leaving a treacherous path.
The simplest of triggers ignite a flame,
A battle waged within, a soul in pain.

Loss of interest, passions once held dear,
Now distant echoes, fading, unclear.
The world becomes a canvas, devoid of hue,
As joy and purpose seem to bid adieu.

But amidst the chaos, a spirit remains,
A flicker of strength, a will that sustains.
For though the darkness may try to consume,
There's a resilience within, a light to bloom.


Scheme AABB CCDD EEFF GGXX HHII JJKK
Poetic Form Quatrain  (83%)
Metre 001110101 01011110 11010001 0101010101 010010101001 11011111001 10010100101 110101110111 1001110101 1001100101 1010010101 1110111011 100000100011 01011001001 0101100101 0101010101 111010111 110101001 01010100111 1101011101 10101001001 0101101101 1101011101 100100010111
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 1,047
Words 199
Sentences 12
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 24
Letters per line (avg) 34
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 137
Words per stanza (avg) 29

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It's about my ptsd

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Written on March 15, 2020

Submitted by jesiccaj91 on July 25, 2023

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Jesicca marsden

Age 32 mother of 2 kids I grow up in the system considered an orphan at 10 more…

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