Analysis of A Good-bye Hurts.



A Good-bye Hurts.

"To part at last without
       kiss,
 Beside the haystack in the
       floods."
                -William Morris.

I cannot give you
   reasons enough,
I do not myself
   understand

The loud lover,
     praying in sin,
Or the pain of those
     who sin in prayer.

A good-bye hurts a
    hundred times more,
Emptying the soul,
    embittering the heart,

Much more than a fatal
   spearwound would.
The happy love is flown,
    a by-gone glow;

Locked in memory's
    gloomy corridors;
A mere past, life
   imprisoned in grief;

Robbed of fulfillment,
    future condemned
      to tears,
Gazing sadly over the
   prey of previous
     existence.

A good-bye hurts.


Scheme A xxbxc xxxx xxxx bxxx xxxx axxx xxxbcx A
Poetic Form
Metre 0111 111101 1 010100 1 1010 11011 1001 1111 01 0110 1001 10111 1101 01110 1011 10001 101 111010 11 010111 0111 101 10100 0111 01001 11010 1001 11 1010100 11100 010 0111
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 687
Words 129
Sentences 7
Stanzas 9
Stanza Lengths 1, 5, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 6, 1
Lines Amount 33
Letters per line (avg) 14
Words per line (avg) 3
Letters per stanza (avg) 51
Words per stanza (avg) 11

About this poem

It's about a lover reflecting upon the silent power of a "good-bye" after love is gone, tone and tint.

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Written on December 12, 1990

Submitted by hakimk.60811 on July 15, 2023

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Hakim Kassim

Born in Mogadishu, Somalia, the poet was raised in a politically prominent family; yet in his early teens, the poet and his family emigrated to the United States, where the poet lived for nearly two decades. Kassim started writing and publishing poetry while in junior college, at a relatively young age, and almost spontaneously fell with poets and poems, and has so been ever since; particularly the Romantic poets--William Wordsworth, George Gordon, Lord Byron, John Keats and Percy Shelley--drew his attention and engaged hìs intellect, so much so that, to this day, they represent more or less 'the epitome' of what Poesy means to him.The poet now lives in his land of birth and works as a freelance journalist and writer. Kassim is currently preparing manuscript of what he hopes to be his first book of poetry; the poet feels a particular attachment to John Keats and Percy Shelley for their vehement opposition to the inhumane effects on ordinary people such as the consequences of industrial development in their lifetimes–and reminds us that technological progress today does the same: ‘Weep, for the world is wrong!’ (emphasis supplied) (Percy Shelley, “Dirge”) more…

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