Analysis of Quick To Express



Quick to hear and heard to express.
That it takes a village,
To raise a child.
For those within the village,
Praying with wishes for that child's success.
Yet...
Who is it bringing into the village,
That proof that protects...
Examples of success to accept and respect it?
With a knowing it takes,
Sacrifice with effort to endeavor.
And support to understand and comprehend,
A village can not alone survive...
On words to hear heard said.
Leaving the people left to perceive,
Those who achieve success eventually...
Should not feel offended,
If their accomplishments are treated...
As a way to discourage children,
From believing themselves better than others.
With a doing to wish,
To share and contribute knowledge obtained.
Away from the village yet to bring back.
But not accepted by the ones,
Not to have that opportunity.
Yet will express their envy and jealousy.
To say and make unwarranted claims,
About one who returns...
Wanting attention given to get.
While tolerating mistreatment,
As if committed to permit their lives to live...
Devoted to the continuance of ignorance.
Quick to hear and heard to express,
By villagers who can not accept...
The meaning of progress and its benefits.

'The village has failed our children!'

No.
The village has remained the same.
It is the people living in it,
Refusing to change their perception...
Of what they mean,
By claiming to stay 'down to Earth'.
Isolated and left behind.
In comfort zones to moan and whine,
About how it had been...
When they were children.
To stay children and not grow up!
As most adults learn to choose and do.

'The village has failed our children!'

No.
Whatever failure experienced by the children?
Had not been created by the village.
But the people living in it.
Defending to protect an accepted ignorance!

'We need funding,
To improve our circumstances.'

With a doing to prove what?
You are prepared with incentive.
Desire and motivation.
To fund what?
More complaints and blame to place on who?


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Poetic Form
Metre 11101101 111010 1101 1101010 1011011101 1 1111001010 11101 0101011010011 101011 101101010 001101001 010110101 111111 100101101 11010101000 111010 110100110 101101010 10100110110 101011 1100101001 0110101111 11010101 11110100 11011100100 110101001 011101 100101011 1100010 110101011111 0101001001100 11101101 110011101 0101101100 010111010 1 01010101 110101001 010111010 1111 11011111 1000101 01011101 011111 11010 11100111 110111101 010111010 1 101001001010 1110101010 10101001 0101011010100 1110 10110100 1010111 11011010 0100010 111 101011111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,980
Words 399
Sentences 44
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 35, 1, 12, 1, 5, 2, 5
Lines Amount 61
Letters per line (avg) 25
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 222
Words per stanza (avg) 48
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Written on August 05, 2023

Submitted by lpahtillah on August 05, 2023

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