Analysis of What can I offer herr
Desmond muzite 2002 (Rusape)
What can I offer her? I asked myself again and again
A heart full of love, a soul full of care but still she refused to let me in
I thought I had everything to give but maybe it wasn’t enough. She needed more to live A different kind of love
I tried tried to change to fit her mold but it wasn’t who I was, l lost myself my heart grew cold and she didn’t budge
It took me time to realize that love is not a trade. It’s not about what you provide but how you make her feel, the memories you have made
So now I offer her my friendship. No strings attached, no expectations just a bond that will never end. And a love that comes with appreciation
I hope one day she’ll see that l was always here. And that the love I had for her was always sincere.
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| Metre | 11110011101001 0111101111111011110 1111101111011011101110100111 11111110111111111111110111 1111110111101110111011111010100111 11110011011011010101111010011110010 11111111111010111101101 |
| Characters | 764 |
| Words | 163 |
| Sentences | 7 |
| Stanzas | 5 |
| Stanza Lengths | 2, 2, 1, 1, 1 |
| Lines Amount | 7 |
| Letters per line (avg) | 82 |
| Words per line (avg) | 22 |
| Letters per stanza (avg) | 115 |
| Words per stanza (avg) | 31 |
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