Analysis of Left roses on your grave

Tee lynn 1989 (California)



She always looked so beautiful
She fell into the roses, so plentiful
Broken on the ground
Drops of crimson red
Soaked the corners of her frown
She smeared it in the petals dried and dead
Thoughts that never unwound
A silent picture movie, running out of film
Blank pictures, black and grey
Withered burned, left in pilm
Quiet melodies,lonely, Left astray

She screams so beautifully
A queen in a crimson bloody crown
Rising elegantly from her grave
vines clung to her dead memories
 Thorns tearing  paper skin, depraved

So silently, she will be lost and never found
Tears of shining diamond,sullen into black
Engulfing words she can never take back
She's left to close her fists
Her head caving in your chest
She thought she had the best
Left with nothing now
 a thousand heartbreaks
She hopes to finally rest
Morphing ,making angels in the the dirt
She burrows ,sinking ,soiled with hurt
 Cracked , masked, her skin cakes
This grave she dug now
She smells the last of you on her favorite shirt
her heart turns to clay
You watered just to play
Till mud runs through your fingers
Forms a pool
A colorless matter

A Devil's playground for the fool
Dust of last pigments ,chalky colors linger
She'll pray for heaven's latter
A man who smiles and who flatters
A sleeping beauty
A heart waiting
To be loved and mend what's shattered
A life worth awakening
A man she yearns to love
Dig up her buried bones, pieces, scattered
A kiss she hopes and prays from up above
Broken bottle with his letter
sent from his messenger dove
Dipped in ink with a feather
Her fairytale finally finished
The earth open not calloused
Her throne renewed and polished
Her heart of stone never to dull or diminish
Hands never to be forsaken
A nightmare forgotten and forever shakened


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Poetic Form Tetractys  (27%)
Metre 1111100 11010101100 10101 11101 1010101 1110010101 111001 010101010111 110101 101101 101101 111100 010010101 101000101 11101100 11010101 110011110101 11101011 0101111011 111101 0110011 111101 11101 0101 1111001 1010100001 11010111 11011 11111 110111101001 01111 110111 1111110 101 010010 0101101 1111011010 1111010 0111011 01010 0110 11101110 0110100 011111 1101011010 0111011101 10101110 1111001 1011010 01010010 0110110 0101010 011110111010 11011010 0101000101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,789
Words 347
Sentences 1
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 11, 5, 19, 20
Lines Amount 55
Letters per line (avg) 26
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 354
Words per stanza (avg) 78
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Written on July 23, 2023

Submitted by teegaeta89 on July 23, 2023

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