Analysis of Wise Postulations of Existence for the Damned



Wise Postulations of Existance for The Damned

Solitude the pathway for self authentication
Interludes of what to say in the process of individuation
Attitudes of slow decay born from ill-considerations
Platitudes in early May about spring time commiserations

Various forms of entropy existing in the atmosphere
Precarious storms of ignomy resisting the biosphere
Nefarious swarms of privacy persisting through the tears
Hillarious warns the indignity insisting on perpetuating fears

Beached whales lined up on a distant shore
Reached sales upon the warehouse floor
Teach the fails to hit the target and never ask for more
Leaches, sails, newts and artists that ask what it’s all really for ?

Conversations of resistance behind a beer soaked bar
Invocations of insistence as the joke has gone too far
Intonations of coincidence upon the backseat of his car
Renovations of pure self-defense as we defend all that we are

Monumental distortions of reality and truth
Consequential misfortunes and an entirely misspent youth
Environmental disproportions stretched beyond scientific proof
Coincidental extortions of the law by the criminally uncouth

Complimentary postulations about what it means to be a wife
Reudimentary indignations about how not to live your life
Sedimentary geographic formations as the earth increases in strife
Elementary imitations of a rare collection knife

Swearing on a stack of Bibles that you’re not telling a lie
Waiting for a revival as the earth begins to die
Stating a perfect recital as what’s worse for both your eyes
Integrating what is vital before you evolve into becoming wise


Scheme X AABB CCXX DDDD EEEE FFXF GGGG HHII
Poetic Form
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Closest metre Iambic octameter
Characters 1,637
Words 273
Sentences 2
Stanzas 8
Stanza Lengths 1, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 29
Letters per line (avg) 47
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 169
Words per stanza (avg) 32

About this poem

The poem explores various aspects of existence and the human condition, offering contemplations on solitude, decay, entropy, privacy, and fear. It presents contrasting images, such as beached whales and reached sales, and questions the purpose of life and the pursuit of self-identity. It touches on resistance, coincidence, defense, reality, truth, and societal imbalances. The poem also includes reflections on relationships, dissatisfaction, environmental concerns, and personal growth. Overall, it provokes thought about the complexities and paradoxes of life, urging readers to seek wisdom and authenticity. 

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Submitted by e.moroz210 on July 19, 2023

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Elizabeth Moroz

Elizabeth Moroz is an original independent poet, visual artist and musician based in Perth, Western Australia. She is of Ukrainian-Croatian heritage and has a black sense of humour. more…

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