Analysis of Ephemeral Laments of Technicality



Ephemeral Laments of Technicality

Qualifications of a criminal mind
Magnifications of virtue in all of mankind
Qauntifications of meaning you cannot seem to find
Fractal notations in dreaming that you’d never leave behind

Geometric cubism born of Platonic Solids
Ego-centric hubris suppressing something rather horrid
Eccentric nudism expressing the inappropriately florid
Concentric prisms forming emotions that are torrid

Looking askance at a street performer
Booking your chance with a militant reformer
Hooking a dance with a brilliant rhythmic transformer
Cooking your political stance before I could even try to warn you

Alarmist cataclysms chiming from the top of an ancient tower
A harmless insubordinate praying for more power
The calmest monk in the monestary lining up for a shower
A brave warrior fiercely fighting who would never stoop to cower

Acrimony among the admired marriage made in heaven
Alimony for the children and a lucky number seven
Parsimony that killed them as the bread became unleavened
Hegemony rebel talk and the great theoretical pretend

Callous disregard for another man’s future
A fallice on the cards and a wound that needs a suture
A chalice that guards a place for motherly-kinds to nurture
A muesli or granola grade described as a sub-category called Bircher

The unrefined disgrace of man living on the edge
The poorly timed embrace for a lover who is dead
The badly mined face of another body filled with lead
The exquisitely refined grace that I feel inside my head

Famine and fortune finding the lucky and the damned
The Saccharine good nature of a boy offering his hand
The ill-defined muscular skeletal system of an old man struggling to stand
The shrill incline of communism in a foreign distant land

Premonitions and inquisitions that formulate a vision
Indecisions and impositions that propagate derision
Smooth renditions of musical genius that consummate precision
Ammunition, a small incision and the  corruption in the police commission

Parliamentary platitudes performing pertinent intentions
Rheudumentary exactitude’s calling out for original inventions
Elementary attitudes hauling opinions through convivial conventions
Sentimental latitudes bawling over hypocritical condescension

Honorary Generals shipping out for war
Apothecaries of ephemerals giving meaning to what it’s all for
A singing canary on a pedestal leaning toward always wanting more
A womanly grieving chemicals seeming as though she’s falling to the floor

The End Copywrite Elizabeth Moroz 2023


Scheme A BBBB XCCC DDDX DDDD EEAX DDDD XFFF XGGG EEEE HHHE IIII X
Poetic Form
Metre 01000110100 0010101001 001011001111 1110110111 100100101110101 0101001101010 10110010101010 0101010000100010 01010100101110 1001101010 101110100010 1001101010010 101010010111101111 01011101111010 0100010101110 01010011011010 01100101011101110 100010010101010 100101000101010 100111101011 0100101001010001 10011010110 0110100111010 010110111001110 011010101101100110 001011110101 0101011010111 01011101010111 01000111110111 1001010010001 01011010110011 010110010010111110011 010111000010101 001001110010 101110010 10101100101100010 01001010000100001010 010010010100010 1110110100010 010101001010100010 010101100100010 10010010111 111101011111 0100101010010011101 01101001011110101 0110010010
Closest metre Iambic octameter
Characters 2,571
Words 428
Sentences 1
Stanzas 13
Stanza Lengths 1, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 1
Lines Amount 46
Letters per line (avg) 46
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 163
Words per stanza (avg) 30

About this poem

The poem explores various aspects of human nature and societal dynamics through abstract and metaphorical language. It delves into themes such as morality, power, relationships, politics, and social structures. The speaker reflects on the contradictions and complexities of life, including the juxtaposition of virtue and crime, the interplay of emotions, and the manipulation of power. The poem also touches on philosophical concepts, artistic expressions, and the impact of societal institutions. Overall, it presents a fragmented yet thought-provoking exploration of the human condition and the intricate nature of existence. 

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Submitted by e.moroz210 on July 19, 2023

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Elizabeth Moroz

Elizabeth Moroz is an original independent poet, visual artist and musician based in Perth, Western Australia. She is of Ukrainian-Croatian heritage and has a black sense of humour. more…

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