Analysis of You’ve Been Given Every Chance (Bussokusekika)

Edwin Tanguma 1966 (CA)



You’ve Been Given Every Chance   (Bussokusekika)

Tick tock tick tock tick
Man’s time is ticking away
There is not much left
My job is almost finished
You’ve been given every chance
That My Father could give you

Edwin Tanguma   Aka   Dagesh


Scheme A AXXXXX X
Poetic Form
Metre 111010011 11111 1111001 11111 111110 11101001 1110111 10010101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 247
Words 43
Sentences 1
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 1, 6, 1
Lines Amount 8
Letters per line (avg) 24
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 63
Words per stanza (avg) 16

About this poem

This one was inspired by Jeremiah 25…Well all mighty powers that be…My Father wants me to let ya’ll know that I won’t be enjoying your special instant coffee for much longer…Oh well…I wonder how special it really is???I guess that it too is just another one of life’s little mysteries…Wonderful weather we’re having, isn’t it???Ya’ll can continue to claim it is nothing more than climate change all you want…I wonder IF My Father Will really destroy the entire earth and ever creature on it???I guess that only time will tell…After all…Ya’ll can’t say that I didn’t warn ya’ll…It’s not as IF I didn’t do a good job for him…After all…A man cannot serve two masters…I sure hope that whoever has my signet seal continues to believe that it is nothing more than a good luck charm…LOL

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Written on July 17, 2023

Submitted by EdwinRayTanguma on July 17, 2023

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