Analysis of I find you better in my poem.



I find you better in my poem.

In my poem when I
kiss on your forehead,
You sweat.
When I kiss on your
lips, they are trembled.
When I lay my head
on your brest, you hugg
me tightly and when I kiss
Your navel, your body squeezes.

But I find you cold
In my pleasure world.
Here you are not as warm
as my fancy world.

So my fancy world is dear
as here I find you very near.


Scheme X XAXXXAXXX XBXB CC
Poetic Form
Metre 111100110 011011 11110 11 11111 11110 11111 11111 1100111 11011010 11111 01101 111111 11101 1110111 11111101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 376
Words 93
Sentences 7
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 1, 9, 4, 2
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 18
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 70
Words per stanza (avg) 20
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Submitted by swarup on July 14, 2023

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Swarup Bhattacharya

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