Analysis of What went wrong



What Went Wrong

Sometimes things fall apart,
And we can't quite put them back together.
Sometimes our love just fades away,
Like a forgotten letter.

We try to hold on tight,
But the winds of change blow strong.
We search for answers in the darkness,
But it seems like everything's gone wrong.

We wonder where our love has gone,
And we try to make it right.
We search for ways to fix the pain,
And find the strength to fight.

But sometimes it's just too much,
And we can't hold on for long.
We learn to let our love go,
And we find the courage to move on.

So when things fall apart,
And the world seems dark and strange,
We'll remember that life goes on,
And there's always a chance for change.


Scheme A BCXC DAXA XDXD XAXE BFEF
Poetic Form
Metre 111 011101 0111111010 011011101 1001010 111111 1011111 111100010 11111011 110110111 0111111 11111101 010111 1011111 0111111 11111011 011010111 111101 0011101 10101111 0110111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 698
Words 157
Sentences 9
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 1, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 21
Letters per line (avg) 25
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 89
Words per stanza (avg) 22

About this poem

People happen to go through a lot, young and old mostly in love life. Unfortunately something are out of our control the only thing we can do is to move on focus on the positive side and accept the change in your life to another level

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Written on June 14, 2023

Submitted by skhosanathulani8 on June 14, 2023

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Thulani Skhosana

18 year girl who loves saved by Jesus, raised by a single parent in KZN. Currently living in Cape Town, Second year student in CPUT studying Entrepreneurship and Business Management more…

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