Analysis of If I Were Your Love



One day our love was so wonderful
We've been together from winter to fall
A sweetheart couple since high school
We dream and plan together for our goal

You've been my strengths
And I'm your weakness
You are my motivation
And I'm your inspiration

I've been there when you had nothing
But you lost me when you have everything
Our dreams that we shared together
You really achieved it with her

Cause in the book of destiny?
There's no you and me
But it always you and her
Life is very big unfair

She let me borrow you for twelve years
Cause you're with her for the rest of the universe
I was your prologue and she is your epilogue
Cause I'm just your pages but she is your princess


Scheme XXXX XXAA BBCC DDCX XXXX
Poetic Form Etheree  (30%)
Quatrain  (20%)
Metre 1110111100 1101011011 0110111 11010101101 1111 01110 111010 011010 11111110 111111110 101111010 11001110 10011100 11101 111100 1110101 11111111 11101011010 11110011110 111110111110
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 683
Words 136
Sentences 2
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 27
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 108
Words per stanza (avg) 26

About this poem

Love that will never be chosen by the man he deeply loves.

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Written on April 24, 2022

Submitted by jimelynjardin on June 28, 2023

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