Analysis of Dancing in the rain



You've had those feelings... you wish your life was done.
You're broken, defeated, and overcome.
Each day more challenging than the last.
Moments of weakness...emotions consistently masked.

There is sadness built up, stirring within,
Reflecting on where your life has been.
You feel alone... all you feel is pain.
Each moment a struggle masked by crying in the rain.

The storms of life will thunder, shoot lightning 'cross your face.
But get up, chin up, and win YOUR race.
You can take charge...refuse to feel defeat.
Just get up, walk out... first step's to move your feet.

Get out of the trench that you've dug for yourself.
Change what you are to improve your mental health.
There's no shame in admitting that life is harder than you can bear.
That's what friends are for...to show comfort and to care.

Don't take the world on all alone; the challenges are real.
Be willing to accept the help you need, friendship, and you'll heal.
Days will get easier; life will cease to be a strain...
Before you know it, you'll be DANCING in the rain.


Scheme XXXX AABB CCDD XXEE FFBB
Poetic Form Quatrain  (60%)
Metre 11110111111 110010010 111100101 101101001 1110111001 010111111 110111111 1100101110001 0111110110111 111110111 11111101 11111111111 11101111101 11111011101 1110010111101111 11111110011 11011101010011 110101011110011 1111001111101 011111110001
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 1,046
Words 209
Sentences 25
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 40
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 160
Words per stanza (avg) 37

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This poem i wrote it based on my emotions

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Written on June 26, 2023

Submitted by payazita1323 on June 27, 2023

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Amparo Villarreal

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