Analysis of A beat skipping love

Mohlahlo Ntombifuthi Promise 2002 (Gauteng Province)



You make me blush, a crimson hue,
My heart beats fast when I see you.
Your voice is sweet, my favorite tune,
Your laugh, a song that makes me swoon.

Each moment passes, yet you stay,
My world revolves around you each day.
I love you more than words can show,
And every day, my love does grow.
My attachment to you ever strong,
In your embrace is where I belong.


Scheme AABB CCDDEE
Poetic Form Etheree  (30%)
Tetractys  (20%)
Metre 11110101 11111111 111111001 11011111 11010111 110101111 11111111 010011111 101011101 010111101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 363
Words 82
Sentences 5
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 4, 6
Lines Amount 10
Letters per line (avg) 28
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 138
Words per stanza (avg) 36

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The poet talks about how she loves seeing her partner.

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Submitted by ntombifuthi_p on June 27, 2023

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