Analysis of Expressions Of Regret



Hoping time for them is still left,
For expressions of regret.
Or heard to accept.
By anyone listening.
Giving time to care more.
Than the more caring less.
Knowing their expectations,
Have long been gone going on disrespected.

Remorse to feel,
Is difficult to mend and heal...
A past to have had.
Too real to conceal,
That which is known with emotions felt.
Revisited to remember,
Each step taken and meant done to do.
With this to reminisce.

Regardless of a forgiveness given.
Or apologies to hear,
Unable to erase with alibis used to excuse.

One's heart broken to break,
Is not easy to fix as if pieces of glass.
Glued back together.
To believe to go unnoticed,
Original pieces will never again fit.
As they were once to have been.
And the same goes for wounds inflicted.
Purposely done by someone else.

That someone else,
Hoping time for them is still left to express...
Remorse and regret.

Yet no time had they taken,
To recover and appear as if nothing to them...
Had happened at all.

Life to live can be a bowl of cherries.
If that bowl is homemade.
And the cherries are grown to pick!


Scheme XAXXXBXC DDXDXEXX FXX XXEXXXCG GBA FXX XXX
Poetic Form
Metre 10111111 1010101 11101 110100 101111 101101 101010 1111101010 0111 11001101 01111 11101 111110101 01001010 111001111 11101 0101001010 1010011 0101011101101 111011 111011111011 11010 10111010 010010110011 1101111 001111010 1001111 111 10111111101 01001 1111110 1010001111011 11011 1111101110 111111 00101111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,098
Words 239
Sentences 26
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 8, 8, 3, 8, 3, 3, 3
Lines Amount 36
Letters per line (avg) 24
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 122
Words per stanza (avg) 28
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Written on July 04, 2023

Submitted by lpahtillah on July 04, 2023

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