Analysis of Unconventional



I used to think
That anyone doing anything odd was odd.
In packaged boxes,
I tucked my curiosity away,
Bowing low to the scripts laid out,
A mastered routine.
But now,
The hinges creak,
Split loose,
And I'm opening,
Bending like a willow.
Unleashing against the tide,
I confront their baffled gaze,
Those gatekeepers of normalcy,
Shrouded in their own shackles.

I suddenly realized
That anyone doing anything weird
Wasn't weird at all.
Their souls dance outside the lines,
Unafraid of colors bleeding,
Unafraid of bold brushstrokes
Imprinted on the canvas
Of the mundane.
A jigsaw puzzle of odd pieces,
They flit and they soar,
Magnetic poles oscillating
Towards the land
Of authenticity.
A clarion call for deviance,
A mosaic of mosaic-makers.

And it was the people saying
They were uncanny
That were uncanny.
They long to bind the sunflowers
To cosmic laws,
Threatened by the unruly growth
Of seedlings between their toes.
They weave ropes of conformity,
Suffocating dreams,
Consigning the peculiar
To dusty corners
Of their minds,
While clutching the comfort
Of their gray,
Uniformed existence.

But here,
The rainbows bloom
With audacious vibrance,
Asserting their wistful grace
Within the maelstrom of convention.
I sip beer with the misfits,
The conjurers,
Lantern bearers,
And we toast
To the unraveling
Of our collective tapestry.
It's in the uniqueness where truth emerges,
Raw and pure,
As we stand courageously
On the precipice of our own becoming.


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Poetic Form Tetractys  (32%)
Etheree  (23%)
Metre 1111 1101010111 01010 111010001 10110111 01001 11 0101 11 01100 10101 0100101 1011101 1101100 1001110 110010 11010101 10111 1111101 0111010 01111 0101010 1001 01101110 11011 0101100 0101 10100 010011100 0010101010 01101010 10010 10010 1111010 1101 10100101 1100111 11110100 1001 10010 11010 111 110010 111 10010 11 011 10101 0101101 010101010 111101 01 1010 011 100100 110010100 10001011010 101 1110100 101001101010
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 1,496
Words 298
Sentences 14
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 15, 15, 15, 15
Lines Amount 60
Letters per line (avg) 20
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 295
Words per stanza (avg) 59
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Written on July 01, 2023

Submitted by JoeStrickland on July 01, 2023

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Joe Strickland

I'm just a regular, blue collar, working stiff who took an interest in writing poetry many years ago but until recently I haven't had a desire to share any with anyone or pursue publication. I'm an unpublished fork lift operator by night, and a day drinker by choice. I can be followed on Twitter @JoeStricklandSC more…

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