Analysis of You have lost your moon



When I started the journey of love with you
I had no clue
That I was just an option for you

All your promises were sweet lies
And I could not read in your eyes

I will find a way to face this loneliness
What really matters for me is your happiness

So I will not force you to stay
If you wanna go away

Even the gap between us is too wide
But I will always be by your side

And you may realize soon
That you have lost your moon


Scheme AAA BB CC DD EE FF
Poetic Form
Metre 11100101111 1111 111111011 11100011 01111011 11101111100 110101111100 11111111 1110101 1001011111 11111111 011101 111111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 429
Words 98
Sentences 1
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 3, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2
Lines Amount 13
Letters per line (avg) 26
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 55
Words per stanza (avg) 15

About this poem

Sometimes we lose the best person in search of the better and we don't realize true love.

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Written on June 28, 2023

Submitted by conquerorvikash30 on June 28, 2023

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Vikash Kumar Mehta

I am a goldmedalist in Information Technology with a keen interest in literature and writing. I am also a FIDE rated chess player but my hobby is to write poetry. I have written poems for many newspapers. I believe that we can achieve anything as long as we have the passion and dedication. I am that guy who loves to chase his dreams, spreads love and tries to bring smile on other’s face. more…

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