Analysis of Our loving Salvation.



He Takes my breath away
I say,
But hath he gave it.

Take my eyes,
But he makes me
See the truth.

Take my flesh away
Do that so I may live,
By the spirit.

And yet he gives.
The breath of my lungs
YHWH.

Help me to receive
Every gift you give,
So that I may share it.

You gave me family
You adopted me.

And spared my life
From sin.

Your grace abounds
In deepest waters.
May I stand my the shore
To receive this beauty
Through the gifts you
Give.

May we share our prayers
And love.

Filled with joy
With you up above.
And an extended family.

And our everlasting salvation
And joy Jesus. May he sit in gods
Righteous Right hand.

May power and glory go to god
And Jesus eternally the gift
Oh his Holy Spirit.


Scheme AAB XCX AXD XXX XEB CC XX XXXCXE XF XFC XXX XXD
Poetic Form
Metre 111101 11 11111 111 1111 101 11101 111111 1010 0111 01111 1 11101 100111 111111 111100 10101 0111 11 1101 01010 111101 101110 1011 1 111101 01 111 11101 01010100 010010010 011011101 1011 110010111 010010001 111010
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 717
Words 176
Sentences 16
Stanzas 12
Stanza Lengths 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 2, 2, 6, 2, 3, 3, 3
Lines Amount 36
Letters per line (avg) 15
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 45
Words per stanza (avg) 12

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A poem dedicated to god and Jesus everlasting gifts.

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Written on June 26, 2023

Submitted by Healslauren on June 27, 2023

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Briana jaramillo

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