Analysis of Some times



Sometimes it is hard to believe, i am out
While i know everytime I am omitted
May be one day I think, i am so good
See my face in the mirror, look like a leviathan.

When i walk around, like a dark spot on a flower
People think i am inferior in every atom of my career
If that is it , i am happy to carry oneself like that
Because sometimes, it is hard to believe i wasn't superior.

Sometimes i perceive, in good Times i would be convalescent
But how could I forget, what I have come through
Somehow i know , i am better than everyone of those
Who some times looking at me, feel i wasn't Excel


Scheme XXXX AXXA XXXX
Poetic Form
Metre 01111101111 1111011010 1111111111 11100101100100 1110110111010 1011101000100101101 11111110110111 01011111011100100 01101011111010 11110111111 111111011011 1111011111001
Closest metre Iambic heptameter
Characters 601
Words 130
Sentences 3
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 12
Letters per line (avg) 38
Words per line (avg) 10
Letters per stanza (avg) 152
Words per stanza (avg) 41

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Just an inner feeling

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Written on June 22, 2023

Submitted by Tahirahmad99 on June 22, 2023

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