Analysis of Call me father

Aldo Gabbay 1964 (sap paulo)



Call me Father
Came from the sky
Pouring down
So fast from the sky
Also there was the lightning
And thunder that
I heard
It was horrible
To hear the thunder
And lightning
I stay at home
All day
And I didn't dare
Go for a walk
Out in the rain
Today I did some
Work for my God
I had written some
Poems for my father
All day
Then when it was
7:00pm
I shut my computer off
And I went straight to bed
Because I was also
Very tired


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Poetic Form
Metre 1110 1101 101 11101 1011010 0101 11 11100 11010 010 1111 11 01101 1101 1001 01111 1111 11101 101110 11 1111 11 1110101 011111 011110 1010
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 426
Words 93
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 26
Lines Amount 26
Letters per line (avg) 13
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 333
Words per stanza (avg) 91

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Written on June 13, 2023

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