Analysis of Smile for a while



I smile for a while
Even when  I am
In pain
It is a hard thing to do
It is not easy to smile
Yes I don't want then to
See that I am in pain
I been also in pain
For a long time now
I know that is a crazy thing to do
But I don't want my friends to
See me in pain
Because they
Worried a lot about me
Yes my friends are very good
To me
Yes I know that they care about me
Yes my friends are always bitching
At me because
I think that they always tells me
That I have to take better care of myself
Yes they are right about that


Scheme ABCDADCCEDDCFGHGGIJGKL
Poetic Form
Metre 11101 10111 01 1101111 1111011 111111 111101 111001 10111 1111010111 1111111 1101 011 1001011 1111101 11 111111011 111111 1101 1111111 1111110111 1111011
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 523
Words 122
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 22
Lines Amount 22
Letters per line (avg) 18
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 399
Words per stanza (avg) 121

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That is a new poem. Written by Aldo Gabbay

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Written on June 10, 2023

Submitted by aldo_k on June 10, 2023

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