Analysis of Forever



When I hear your voice life gives me that choice;
To want to know more about you and me because sometimes it is hard to see.
Throughout the years I surely know what it is I want;
The simple tenderness, love, ambition, energy, unconditional love you once had within.
Almost there; almost there
I keep asking are you sure you want me?
Are you 100% sure that you want me?
You used to say it with so much care;
I know I am in love; I know I am ready, and I can leave all the petty.
I know I am ready;
I know I am ready;
I know I am ready!
To stand across from you on our special day;
Deep down I know it is going to be ok.
I take everything I have including my faith to love, to protect, and to never give up on you.  
So, with what you know what I want to do,  
Can you look into my eyes on our special day and say to me I do?
With forever love, and forever heart;
So far, the past 6 years have been the best and most beautiful start.  


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Poetic Form
Metre 1111111111 1111101101010111111 0101110111111 01010010101000100111101 1111 1110111111 1111111 111111111 11110111111001111010 111110 111110 111110 110111110101 111111101111 111011010111110101101111 1111111111 1110111110101011111 1010100101 110111101011001
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 950
Words 214
Sentences 11
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 19
Lines Amount 19
Letters per line (avg) 37
Words per line (avg) 10
Letters per stanza (avg) 701
Words per stanza (avg) 196

About this poem

This poem is about how the person truly feels about their significant other.

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Written on May 26, 2023

Submitted by Lucky187 on June 09, 2023

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