Analysis of Spoil you

Sunrene 2006 (Minsk)



Don’t think I’d like to hold you
I’d like you to stay on feet
Sad to say I look back at you
It’s my turn to climb a tree

Am I about to spoil you?
I don’t think I’m going to
It’s not like I can see you through
I just know when you’re in the mood

Why are you digging a hole?
I'm sure it's not to confuse me
What are you smiling for?
There’s some tension here

Am I about to spoil you?
I don’t think I’m going to
It’s not like I can see you through
I just know when you’re in the mood

If being honest I kinda hate thinking about you
But I can’t forbid myself that,I just can’t afford to


Scheme axab AAAC xbxx AAAC aa
Poetic Form
Metre 1111111 1111111 11111111 1111101 1101111 1111101 11111111 11111001 1111001 11111011 111101 11101 1101111 1111101 11111111 11111001 11010110110011 111011111011
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 619
Words 138
Sentences 5
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 2
Lines Amount 18
Letters per line (avg) 24
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 87
Words per stanza (avg) 25

About this poem

This poem is dedicated to the person with whom I was in a relationship and who most likely believes that I still need him,but I don’t. I came back to explain to you why I did what I did, not because I love you.

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Written on April 30, 2023

Submitted by sunrene on May 02, 2023

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