Analysis of Prisoner of My Mind

Elizabeth Roberts 1987 (Lansing)



A raging war inside my head
Thoughts consuming,
A prisoner.
Worries wandering
Problems blooming
Nothing is really wrong
It's all so confusing
Slow it down, hit pause
Try to rewind
Too late all memories lost
Hit play try to make sense
Overthinking
Always analyzing
Causing issues
Guided by mistrust,
Alone forever.
A Prisoner in my own mind


Scheme ABCBBDBEFGHBBIJCF
Poetic Form
Metre 01010111 1010 0100 10100 1010 101101 111010 11111 1110 1111001 111111 1 1100 1010 10101 01010 01000111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 342
Words 64
Sentences 3
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 17
Lines Amount 17
Letters per line (avg) 16
Words per line (avg) 3
Letters per stanza (avg) 277
Words per stanza (avg) 57

About this poem

I wrote this poem because I was in a dark time in my life and it just made sense.

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Written on October 18, 2018

Submitted by jbkmills on May 23, 2023

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Elizabeth Roberts

I am a 35 year old, who loves to write poetry and have been since as far back as I can remember. I like to write about experiences or ways that I may be feeling at the time. Everything I have ever written has my own experience or feelings tied into it one way or another. more…

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