Analysis of My dad "the weatherman"
Pain causes tears, tears cause rain
Will the sun ever shine again.
I'll never stop talking about my dad,
Coz there happy memories
that make me glad!
In the garden the sun would shine
My brother and sister and me in a line.
Wishing this feeling would last forever,
The sun shining down,
This glorious weather!
Then the sky looks gloomy
It's not too clear!
I wish the clouds would disappear.
Then the rain starts to fall,
Our dad is missed by us all.
Then the memories come flooding back,
we loved our Dad and thats a fact!
The walks we done years ago,
Over fields and hills
In sun and snow!
The moon, the sun, the stars, the sky
As I look up into the sky.
Why oh why did my dad die,
Coz this is the weather
As time goes by!
Scheme | XXAXA BBCXC XDDEE XXFXF GGGCG |
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Poetic Form | Tetractys (24%) |
Metre | 1101111 10110101 1101100111 1110100 1111 00100111 11001001001 1011011010 01101 110010 101110 1111 1101101 101111 10111111 101001101 111010101 0111101 10101 0101 01010101 11110101 1111111 111010 1111 |
Closest metre | Iambic tetrameter |
Characters | 737 |
Words | 166 |
Sentences | 11 |
Stanzas | 5 |
Stanza Lengths | 5, 5, 5, 5, 5 |
Lines Amount | 25 |
Letters per line (avg) | 22 |
Words per line (avg) | 6 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 111 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 29 |
About this poem
After losing my dad in 2010, I started writing poetry and this was the 1st poem I wrote and its about my dad who loved walking through the countryside in all weathers. I used the weather to express my emotions.
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