Analysis of Is it okay?

Mahika Sareen 2006 (Uttar pardesh)



Is it okay?
Is it okay for you? To love me? Knowing that I'll overthink everything u say?

You softly stop me from asking, "is it okay"?
But

I need you to be honest with me!
Is it okay for you? To love me? Knowing that I'll cry after every fight?

I am quite exhausted from being strong!
Is it okay for you to let me sleep next to you? When I want you to hold me tight?

The nightmares have made me a little tired!
But is it okay if I need you to tell me how much things done by me are admired?

Is it okay for you to love me? When I need my mind to be called beautiful before my body to be called hot?

Is it okay for you to love me? I need you i really do! But can u stop pushing me aside?

Is it okay if i want u to gently wrap me in your arms when I'm done crying?

I will always love you but?
Is it okay for you to be a man my future daughter can always call?

It is okay for you!!!! To be a man because of who?
My future son can say "I learned how to love? From you two!"

Is it okay for you? If i need you to love me forever? And ever? Without measure?
It would be my pleasure


Scheme AA AB XC XC DD X X X BX EE FF
Poetic Form
Metre 111 11111111101111011 11011110111 1 111111011 1111111110111101001 1110101101 11111111111111111111 0111101010 111111111111111111010 1111111111111111100011101111 111111111111101111110101 11111111101101111110 111111 11111110111010111 1111111010111 11011111111111 1111111111110100100110 111110
Closest metre Iambic octameter
Characters 1,103
Words 267
Sentences 31
Stanzas 11
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 1, 1, 1, 2, 2, 2
Lines Amount 19
Letters per line (avg) 42
Words per line (avg) 12
Letters per stanza (avg) 73
Words per stanza (avg) 21

About this poem

It is a poem about a insecure girl who want to be loved

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Written on March 02, 2006

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