Analysis of I always chose you

Laci Jones 2008 (californa)



Laci Jones
             I Always chose you
I kept trying to give you my all
Tired of being one of your little options
Had me mad and crying, sliding down a wall
I wanted to love and care for you a ton
Giving someone who dosent try to change to many chances
Trying to go and not care no more
You must want my feelings turn into ashes
My feelings for you are strong for sure
Heart hurting when i see you with another girl
I wish you’d understand i want you care for me more
You make my mind blurr
Its been a long, hard war
Some how I still have love  for you in my heart
Never wanted it to get to where we are apart


Scheme ABCDCEFGFHIGGGJJ
Poetic Form
Metre 11 1111 111011111 101101111010 11101010101 11011011101 1011111111010 101101111 11111010110 110111111 110111110101 111011111111 11111 110111 11111111011 1010111111101
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 617
Words 129
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 16
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 29
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 470
Words per stanza (avg) 128

About this poem

I've always chose this boy hes always been the only one i want and he keeps having options and not choosing and hurting me when i turly care.

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Written on May 10, 2023

Submitted by ljones0061 on May 26, 2023

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