Analysis of A Mother's Dream



There was a little boy with a heart full of love,  
Whose mother was sick and in need of a shove.  
To fulfill her dreams he had made up his mind,  
And leave no stone unturned, no obstacle behind.  

He searched far and wide to find a way,  
To make his mother's dreams come true, day by day.  
With each passing moment, he grew stronger and bolder,  
His love for his mother only grew larger.  

He gathered all his courage, and gave it his best,  
Putting his mother's needs before his own quest.  
His days were long, and his nights were short,  
But he didn't give up, he was her last resort.  

At times he would falter, and his spirits would lag,  
But his mother's smile, was the only thing that could drag.  
His heart back to the path, that he'd chosen long ago,  
Never stopping, never slowing, no matter how tough the blow.  

And one fine day, when the stars shone bright,  
And the moon smiled on him, with all its might,  
He finally succeeded, and made his mother proud,  
For her dreams had come true, and her soul was no longer in a shroud.  

The little boy had fulfilled, his mother's heart's desire,  
And in doing so, he had lit his own inner fire.  
For he realized, that in fulfilling another's dream,  
Lies the key to one's own happiness, so it seems.  

So let's take a lesson, from the little boy so brave,  
And fulfill someone's dreams, to make their life less grave.  
For in doing so, we shall find, our own joy and bliss,  
And spread love and kindness, in a world that sorely needs this.


Scheme AABB CCDD EEFF GGHH IIJJ DDXX KKLL
Poetic Form Quatrain  (86%)
Metre 110101101111 11011001101 10101111111 011101110001 111011101 11110111111 1110101110010 11111010110 110111001111 10110101111 110101101 111011110101 111110011011 1110110101111 1111011110101 101010101101101 011110111 0011111111 1100010011101 1011110011110001 01011011101010 00101111111010 1110100100101 101111100111 1110101010111 00111111111 10101111101101 01101000111011
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 1,521
Words 312
Sentences 13
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 28
Letters per line (avg) 40
Words per line (avg) 10
Letters per stanza (avg) 160
Words per stanza (avg) 40

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Because of a Son love to his mother he promised to fulfill his mother's dream.

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Written on May 05, 2023

Submitted by dpc_loans on May 11, 2023

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