Analysis of Neighbours put in their place, fencing…



We have a common
Fence.
Rocks and mortar.
Repointed many a time.
Sometimes by Art
Or by me and Brother Spencer.
Self interest was
Surprisingly absent.
Whereas in the city
Conflict would have
Gone to Court.
Naming nasty names, deeds.

But sadly this past
Hallowe’en
Five kids from down
The hill came with spades
Snickering, unheard.
And decimated our
Long respected agreement.
Rocks all over the place.
Everything seemed un-governed.
Lacking in the orderly touch.

Art could only laugh.
Says he, Get a blindfold
Drop a stone at the
Tip of your left foot.
Where you think the
Starting point makes sense.

Still blindfolded, toss
The second stone ahead.
Try for about a
Forty-five foot distance,
Art would monitor the
Trajectory thus created.
Boundary then extends
All the way, southwesterly.
Along that very line.

To Old Macfarlane’s big
Apple tree.
We remember seeing that.
Point of reference.
Job done, and done
Reasonably.

We will forego
The legals, surveys
And Title Registry.
OK?


Scheme ABCXXCXDEXXX XXXXXCDXXX XXFXFB XXFGFXXXX XEXGAE XXEX
Poetic Form
Metre 11010 1 1010 11001 0111 11101010 1101 010010 010010 1011 111 101011 11011 01 1111 01111 10001 010010 1010010 111001 101110 10001001 11101 11101 10110 11111 1110 10111 1101 010101 11010 101110 111000 01001010 100101 1011 011101 1111 101 1010101 11100 1101 1000 1101 01001 010100 11
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 1,003
Words 205
Sentences 26
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 12, 10, 6, 9, 6, 4
Lines Amount 47
Letters per line (avg) 17
Words per line (avg) 3
Letters per stanza (avg) 130
Words per stanza (avg) 27

About this poem

With respect for the images by Robert Frost concerning fences in Vermont. And neighbours.

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Written on June 05, 2023

Submitted by dougb.19255 on June 05, 2023

Modified by dougb.19255 on June 05, 2023

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Wayne Blair

Born in London. Graduated law 1976 Practised eleven years, Married Hilary 1974 Two kids Lauren 1980 And Jordan 1987. Business failed 1987. Moved not knowing whither. Happy hills of Waterloo Region. Mennonite Country. Thirty four years in Industry. No complaints. Poet, photographer, nature hiker. Harmonica busker. http://puffnchord7.blogspot.com/ more…

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