Analysis of In The Stars



Thank you for being with me
For all those good times
You gave love so free
I know that sometimes
You’re right here with me

The pain in my soul
Is not all I know
There’s love and happiness
I remember your kiss
And your smile so bright
It lit up those dark times
In my life
I didn’t think I’d survive

And now time has gone by
Since you passed from this life
I don’t know where you are
But I know it’s not far
And I’ll always keep close
Your memory in my heart

Rest dearly now
Find peace and love
And when the time comes
I’ll see you in the stars


Scheme ABABA XXXXXBCX XCDDXX XXXX
Poetic Form
Metre 1111011 11111 11111 11101 11111 01011 11111 110100 101011 01111 111111 011 111101 011111 111111 111111 111111 01111 1100011 1101 1101 01011 111001
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 570
Words 125
Sentences 1
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 5, 8, 6, 4
Lines Amount 23
Letters per line (avg) 18
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 106
Words per stanza (avg) 29
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Written on June 18, 2021

Submitted by mtrujillo7587 on June 05, 2023

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Mary Helen Trujillo

Mary Helen Trujillo was born April 16, 1987, in Denver CO. She is a long-time writer and lyricist, recently published. Though she wears many hats, having gone to school for automotive technology, being an emergency medical dispatcher for over a decade, a mother, daughter, friend and wife, her love for writing and healing through poetry remains strong and deeply rooted. It is in her writing that she finds peace from the busy world and invites everyone to share in her words of love, heartbreak, resilience, tragedy and chaos. more…

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