Analysis of Confused version of life

V.S.Motewad 2003 (Bhaktapur)



When we enter the life of adults from teens

We get confuse over things, we create seens

We get to know new rules and regulations

We get to know news problems and solutions

We laugh, we cry, we fear over words

We become stylish, we become nerds

We try to look into others eyes

We fall for all that unusual lies

We always try to mask-up

All we do is we mess-up

We trust few peoples blindly

They crush our emotions mindly

We fall, we stood up again, we walk

We learn to accept failure, we talk

Buddy, here we create a lot of hype

This is just confused version of life…


Scheme A A B B C C D D E E F F G G X X
Poetic Form
Metre 11100110111 11011011011 1111110010 11111100010 111111101 101101011 111101101 111110101 111111 1111111 1111010 11100101 111110111 111011011 1011010111 111011011
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 582
Words 127
Sentences 1
Stanzas 16
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 28
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 28
Words per stanza (avg) 7

About this poem

This poem is about a teenager who is on the verge to be an adult. This poems depicts all the confusion the teenager have about his changing life.

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Written on January 04, 2023

Submitted by on May 17, 2023

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V.S.Motewad

I am a student from India. I completed my 12th in year 2022. Now I am preparing for premedical entrance exam. I like writing poems from my teenage. The things happening around me are the inspiration of my poems. more…

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