Analysis of The Last Day



The Last Day

Second,minute,hours and passes the day,
With every passes, nudges the end of highway.
The blend of rise and set is what life all about.
It too starts and end but still the people doubt!

Few stories are told but most of them remain untold,
Luckies hit their destiny but unluckies bow out unfold.
"I am doing is" better than "tomorrow I may",
'Cause no one knows when is the last day.

The love for beloved is like the value of pie,
Love is weired its tough accepting goodbye!
People say its all the human fate
But no one knows where is the last gate!

With all the memories, glee and glum closes the sight.
All screams and cries, on the body fall tears and sunlight.
Think great, work hard script your name in the golden clay,
'Cause no one really knows when is the actual last day !


Scheme A AABB CCAA DDEE FFAA
Poetic Form
Metre 011 101001 110010100111 011101111101 11101110101 1101111110101 111100111101 111011010111 111111011 011011101011 111110101 101110101 111111011 1101001011001 110110101101 111111100101 11110111010011
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 797
Words 170
Sentences 10
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 1, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 17
Letters per line (avg) 36
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 123
Words per stanza (avg) 30

About this poem

The poem emphasizes the fleeting nature of time and how we should make the most of every moment, because no one knows when their time will run out. It encourages the reader to cherish their loved ones and to not take their presence for granted, for the love and memories we create with them are what truly matter. The poem also touches upon the idea of fate and how it is not something we can always control. Some people may be luckier than others, but ultimately, it is up to us to make the most of the time we have been given. It is important to take action and pursue our dreams, rather than waiting for the perfect moment, because the reality is that there may never be a perfect moment. In conclusion, my poem "The Last Day" is a reminder to live each day to the fullest and make the most of our time on this earth. It inspires us to pursue our dreams and leave a lasting legacy, so that even after our last day has come and gone, our impact can still be felt. 

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Submitted by gyawaliaadesh111 on April 24, 2023

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Aadesh Gyawali

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