Analysis of The devil inside



The devil inside

The old man
Stands at the devils door
Watches and waits
He's been there before
Puts a hand in his pocket
For a freshly cut key
Turns that old lock
He knows what he'll see

Sins of the flesh
The wages of youth
All kept on a film
In a photograph booth
He hears cries in the stairwells
Way down below
Brings back nightmares
Of things he might know

The old man moves
Further on down
To a place back in time
To a very old town
Wrongs and rights
On every street
Ghosts walk by he cannot greet

He's back at the door now
He closes it tight
His memories are fading
Like the coming of night
The old man has known
A devil or two
Whispers softly to himself
It's me and it's you.
                                 R P Edwards


Scheme X XAXAXBXB XCXCXDXD XEXEXFF XGXGXHXHX
Poetic Form
Metre 01001 011 110101 1001 11101 1010110 101011 1111 11111 1101 01011 11101 00101 111001 1101 111 11111 0111 1011 101101 101011 101 11001 1111101 111011 11011 1100110 101011 01111 01011 1010101 11011 1110
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 736
Words 152
Sentences 2
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 1, 8, 8, 7, 9
Lines Amount 33
Letters per line (avg) 17
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 109
Words per stanza (avg) 28

About this poem

It's an observation of the many faces of humanity and those things that reside inside all of us. Those things we don't like to admit are part of who we are.

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Written on December 08, 2018

Submitted by royboyjogger on March 28, 2023

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R P Edwards

Not much to tell. Like every human being I have stories to tell. Hopefully they help people appreciate this wonderful life we are gifted and hopefully the words I write can be helpful to people and bring a measure of peace to their lives. That's what I'm aiming for. Maybe I'll find fame and fortune along the way. Ha ha ha. more…

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