Analysis of The cliff



The salt of the sea invades the brain with its dull smell
Legs dangling off the cliff
and the stars looking down.
just the waves on the beach,
a poet,
a speech.
it would be a shame to fall off,
with the stars looking down.
they would be so disappointed
if they could see it now.


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Poetic Form
Metre 0110101011111 1100101 001101 101101 010 01 11101111 101101 1111010 111111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 283
Words 63
Sentences 4
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 10
Lines Amount 10
Letters per line (avg) 22
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 216
Words per stanza (avg) 56

About this poem

This poem was written when i was very unstable, and was very depressed. it was talking about how i wanted to fall off a cliff, even if i never did.

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Written on April 25, 2022

Submitted by maybe_someflower on April 11, 2023

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