Analysis of I'm fighting hard

Elsa Kirsten 1981 (South Africa)



I'm fighting hard

I've worked too hard to go back to the old me...
Sometimes, looking in the mirror... she is all I see.

I'm fighting hard for her, not to creep back at me...
Sometimes a wall is at my back...attack upon attack...

Life is hard, it has no regard for your pain or your feelings of  shame..
It beats you and slanders your name.

I got up and decided, I will never be the same, I gave Him all my pain and all my shame...

The things I once tolerated ...I can't no more
That was for the one I was before...

The past is there, that I can't ignore...
But I'm not going back to who I was before...


Scheme X AA AX BB B CC CC
Poetic Form
Metre 1101 11111111011 0110001011111 110110111111 010111110101 11111101111111011 11101011 11101011101011111110111 01111001111 111011101 011111101 111101111101
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 609
Words 138
Sentences 13
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 1, 2, 2, 2, 1, 2, 2
Lines Amount 12
Letters per line (avg) 36
Words per line (avg) 10
Letters per stanza (avg) 62
Words per stanza (avg) 18

About this poem

This poem is a personal poem, born from internal struggles.

Font size:
 

Written on February 27, 2023

Submitted by elsakirsten1981 on April 14, 2023

43 sec read
0

Elsa Kirsten

My Name is Elsa Kirsten, I am 41 years old. I am married and have 3 children. I live in South Africa. I am passionate about languages. I am busy completing my teaching degree, while employed at a private Christian School. I love to write poetry from a very young age, the passion only recently came to the surface again. more…

All Elsa Kirsten poems | Elsa Kirsten Books

1 fan

Discuss this Elsa Kirsten poem analysis with the community:

0 Comments

    Citation

    Use the citation below to add this poem analysis to your bibliography:

    Style:MLAChicagoAPA

    "I'm fighting hard" Poetry.com. STANDS4 LLC, 2024. Web. 21 May 2024. <https://www.poetry.com/poem-analysis/158612/i%27m-fighting-hard>.

    Become a member!

    Join our community of poets and poetry lovers to share your work and offer feedback and encouragement to writers all over the world!

    May 2024

    Poetry Contest

    Join our monthly contest for an opportunity to win cash prizes and attain global acclaim for your talent.
    10
    days
    12
    hours
    34
    minutes

    Special Program

    Earn Rewards!

    Unlock exciting rewards such as a free mug and free contest pass by commenting on fellow members' poems today!

    Browse Poetry.com

    Quiz

    Are you a poetry master?

    »
    Which of these poets was not American?
    A Rudyard Kipling
    B Emily Dickinson
    C Ezra Pound
    D Walt Whitman