Analysis of Acid Rain

Lilleth Helena 1987 (Dupont)



The clouds came in over me
Acid rain has took it's toll
It spared my fragile skin
But ate away my soul

Crying out to God in screams
But I heard that he was dead
He left me all alone
With these demons In my head

Doubts are louder now
I left the shore of hope
Leaving nothin but a bottle
For me to try and cope

I swear it trys to numb me
All the voices in my brain
But even Johnny walker
Can't make this girl more sane

The gashes getting deeper
All I want is some release
It even keeps me haunted
When I'm laying down for sleep


Scheme ABXB XCXC XDXD AEFE FXXX
Poetic Form Quatrain  (80%)
Etheree  (25%)
Metre 0110101 1011111 111101 110111 1011101 1111111 111101 1110011 11101 110111 10101010 111101 1111111 1010011 1101010 111111 0101010 1111101 1101110 1110111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 529
Words 115
Sentences 1
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 21
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 82
Words per stanza (avg) 22
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Written on March 16, 2023

Submitted by lilleth_h on April 08, 2023

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