Analysis of A Time When You Made a Difference



In days of yore, a time long past,
I found myself in a moment that would last.
A moment of truth, a moment of grace,
A time when I made a difference in this place.

It started like any other day,
With the sun rising in a gentle way.
I went about my business, doing what I must,
And never thought that I'd make such a fuss.

But then I saw her, a woman in need,
Her face etched with pain, her heart in bleed.
She struggled with life, with all its weight,
And I knew I had to help, before it's too late.

I reached out my hand, and took hers in mine,
And together we walked, side by side.
I listened to her story, her trials and woes,
And offered her comfort, as we strolled.

We sat down by a tree, beneath the blue sky,
And I shared with her, a poem that came by.
The words flowed freely, like a river of hope,
And she felt the warmth, like a loving hand of a rope.

The sun began to set, casting a golden hue,
And we both knew, what we had to do.
We hugged each other, and said goodbye,
But deep inside, we knew our bond would never die.

That moment changed her life, and mine as well,
For we both found something, we couldn't foretell.
A connection so pure, so full of grace,
A time when I made a difference, in this place.


Scheme aabB ccxx ddee xxxx ffgg hhff iibB
Poetic Form Quatrain  (71%)
Metre 01110111 1110010111 0101101011 011110100011 110110101 1011000101 110111010111 0101111101 1111001001 011110101 110111111 011111101111 1111101001 001011111 110101001001 010010111 11110101011 01110010111 01110101011 0110110101101 010111100101 011111111 11110011 1101111011101 1101010111 11111011001 0010111111 011110100011
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 1,226
Words 281
Sentences 14
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 28
Letters per line (avg) 33
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 131
Words per stanza (avg) 35
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Written on May 04, 2023

Submitted by Auliq-Ice on May 05, 2023

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