Analysis of Follow the flow to rise and fall
Ruds Cyber G Dondon 2006 (Ormoc City ,Leyte)
I've learned coming back to my self,
Where in those days that i feel like going to explode,
When my view to the moment just vanished
Deep breathes or shouting was my escape.
The sensual feeling body is grounding,
I can feel my soul vibrating through this vessel.
That even our minds are so mad and crazy
That even our eyes might be in the past or future
That we cant see clearly to what is occurring
That even the rain stops you from washing your clothes
Let's meet at the present,we can still come back
It only takes to follow the breathe to its rise and fall.
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 11101111 1011111110101 1111010110 111101101 01001010110 111111001110 110101111010 11010111001110 111110111010 110011111011 111011111 11011100111101 |
Closest metre | Iambic hexameter |
Characters | 563 |
Words | 116 |
Sentences | 3 |
Stanzas | 3 |
Stanza Lengths | 4, 4, 4 |
Lines Amount | 12 |
Letters per line (avg) | 37 |
Words per line (avg) | 9 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 148 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 36 |
About this poem
its about returning to your self when things gets rough to be a mother or a father to your self ,to be grounded or to feel yourself in other words. so we cant be distracted by the thinking mind which stops us from breathing and may kill us if we are too stress or depressed. I am Ruds Dondon ,a poet of enlightenment
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Written on May 04, 2023
Submitted by rudscyberdondon on May 03, 2023
Modified on May 03, 2023
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