Analysis of My Existence

Tommy L. Maddox 1972 (North Carolina)



Oh soft light,
that feels so right.
Bring me your love,
on this summer, rainy night.

Your fire burns away,
the cold, lonely darkness.
That I call home,
and your kiss warms my very soul.

I yearn for your touch,
but only find air.
You are never here,
and always there.

For you are in my heart,
and in my memories.
I am you and you are me.

My love,
my life,
My reason for existing.


Scheme AABA XXXX XCXC XXX BXX
Poetic Form
Metre 111 1111 1111 1110101 110101 011010 1111 01111101 11111 11011 11101 011 111011 001100 1110111 11 11 1101010
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 382
Words 97
Sentences 9
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 3, 3
Lines Amount 18
Letters per line (avg) 16
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 57
Words per stanza (avg) 15
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Written on April 22, 2023

Submitted by tmaddox3 on April 22, 2023

Modified on April 28, 2023

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Tommy L. Maddox

Tommy L. Maddox has traveled the world and seen many wonderful and horrible things. Cursed by demons and been blessed by angels. During a time when he was at a loss for what life was to be about his heart opened up and poetry flowed forth. From there came songs and the need to fill himself with more knowledge of the world. A path that has lead to history, theology, religion, philosophy and the discovery that his ancestors were famous musicians from King George of France and the Queen Elizabeth the 1st to the first musician to hold the title of Master of the Kings Music. (Nicholas "The Younger" Lanier.) All the way forward in time to "A Street Car Named Desire." There are many other aspects from which he came from and has created his own path which continues to develop as he moves forward. more…

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