Analysis of Your on Your Path, Me on Mines



Things I wish to say when you're gone

'I miss you' and 'I wish you're here' rush through my mind

Droning with in denial

But when you're here life and the sky is more than clear

When we talk, life all bad is gone and good is in its way

Oh, if you were here, life would be so much better with you

But you on your path and me on mines

Life is best if we were friend


Scheme X X X X X X X X
Poetic Form
Metre 11111111 111011111111 1010010 111110011111 11111111011011 11101111111011 111110111 1111101
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 369
Words 86
Sentences 1
Stanzas 8
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 8
Letters per line (avg) 34
Words per line (avg) 10
Letters per stanza (avg) 34
Words per stanza (avg) 10

About this poem

This poem was from my Wattpad account. It's a great story, in my opinion.

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Written on April 12, 2023

Submitted by Basket_001 on April 21, 2023

Modified by Basket_001 on April 21, 2023

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