Analysis of The Gates Of Heaven



I didn’t love myself,

So the world couldn’t love me

I was broken and bruised internally

How does someone find oneself?

Numb, deprived of feeling

When memories self-destruct

If only i could reconstruct

A body, mind more appealing

Self harm, self-hate

Are they different or the same?

It’s time to reclaim

My life, change my fate

The world’s a scary place

Filled with absurd opinions, discrimination

What happened to one nation?

under God , there is no Race

We are built with similar anatomy

Different colors, like a rainbow

Together we could grow

There’s more than one commonality

The distortion of media today

Is nothing but a facade

They edit, change what’s flawed

Behind the acting, what they say

You’ll find imperfections erased

Behind photo shop, makeup

Everything’s different closeup

Not exactly being two faced

We all hide vulnerable things

Look past the smiling faces

The ones who laugh often

Stop judging all living things

When a tree catches a disease

It doesn’t always fall to the ground

It stands tall, where it was found

Waiting to be put at ease

injured animals don't give up

They lick their wound

Some limp away without a sound

Why do we tend to self-corrupt

When i close my eyes at night

I imagine a world without challenges

A population without illnesses

Everyone's happy, no need to fight

When morning comes, i awaken

To the cold hard truth, that awaits

In the end, we all have the same fate

Passed the gates of Heaven.


Scheme A B B A C D D C E F F E G H H G B I I B J X X J K L L K M X H M N O O N L O O X P Q Q P H X E H
Poetic Form
Metre 1111 101111 1110010100 11111 101110 1100101 1101101 01011010 1111 11100101 11101 11111 010101 11010100010 1101110 1011111 11111000100 10010101 010111 11110100 0010110001 1101001 110101 01010111 1101001 01111 1010011 10101011 11110001 1101010 011110 1101101 10110001 1111101 1111111 1011111 10100111 1111 11010101 11111101 1111111 10100101100 001001100 10101111 11011010 10111101 001111011 101110
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,501
Words 302
Sentences 4
Stanzas 48
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 48
Letters per line (avg) 24
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 24
Words per stanza (avg) 5

About this poem

Hope this poem helps inspire others to be kinder to others and see the beauty in the world. We all want world peace a place to feel safe. I hope this poem reminds people that we have to Unite and be kind to Each other. Before the world falls apart.

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Written on March 04, 2019

Submitted by solemnlybetr8 on March 05, 2023

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Nicole Stevenson

I love to express my self and my thoughts through poetry. It’s helped me over come many challenges. Writing has away of taking you on many journeys. To self-expression, and self-discovery. I want my poems to inspire others and help bring peace and happiness. more…

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