Analysis of Probity

Pankaj Rawat 1993 (Uttarakhand)



Ray from mighty sun go straight,
mere feather holds courage to barricade,
it's destruction seems explicit,
burn to death written in fate.

The ray would not bend , would not cheat.
Even if it's in place faraway.
Even if no one is watching.
Even if it's needed in there.

Leaves thriving in chaotic pattern uniformly,
Similitude was never there nor was any rivalry.
Coz ideal is irksome, one sprouting preeminent way,
adjacent gone wicked, for the beauty, to stay.

Faraway a star, burning it's heart,
deep in the dark, without a pulse,
no planets to run, species to nurture
revolving for end with same impulse.


Scheme AXXA XBXX CCBB XDXD
Poetic Form Quatrain  (50%)
Metre 1110111 110110110 10101010 1111001 01111111 101101101 10111110 10111001 110001010100 111011110100 10111011001001 010110101011 101011011 10010101 1101110110 010111110
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 610
Words 121
Sentences 8
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 30
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 119
Words per stanza (avg) 26

About this poem

It's about the abstract interpretation of nature's integrity.

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